Wednesday, January 23, 2008

the old man in chuck-e-cheeses -- by Aidan

One day a old man and his son named jack went to chuck-e-cheeses. Jack fond a penny on the grond. Jack gived the penny to his dad. The old man sliped on a quter. Ron used the quter to play a game in chuck-e-cheese and Jack did the same thing as the old man. and they went home. The end.

2 comments:

Mr. Gumina said...

A very imaginative story, Aidan. I especially liked how Ron used the same quarter that Dad slipped on to play a game. I wonder how the old man felt about that.

Anonymous said...

My grapoa gos to chuckecheeses.