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For January, "Surprise" stories! We pulled character, setting and problem from 3 different envelopes - then developed them into a story with our own solution! Look for 2nd grade authors who are using quotation marks for dialogue, adjective-noun combinations to make their stories more interesting, and all around imaginative tales. (**Stories are in their original form, with no adult editing.) Our Nov. and Dec. stories are still available; go back and see how much we've grown!

Monday, November 5, 2007

Will's Story

Once upon a time there was a mom bat named Sue. The mom bat had tiny baby bats named Chris, Brooke and William. One day there was a new owl in the forest named Brak. Brak was mean. He tried to eat them and the mom bat protected them. The End

15 comments:

DebLeaf said...: Great Story, Will. I know a bat named Sue too! Isn't that funny?
Great writing!
Deb; November 8, 2007 4:09 PM
alexander said...: I like bats.; November 13, 2007 10:05 AM
greg said...: it was the best; November 13, 2007 5:40 PM
aidan said...: Will i was thanking that there were bats that are anmails; November 13, 2007 8:01 PM
ALYSSA said...: wow GOOD WILL; November 14, 2007 9:52 AM
Emily said...: I like it Will.; November 14, 2007 10:21 AM
Anonymous said...: thanks; November 14, 2007 10:22 AM
Anonymous said...: thanks; November 14, 2007 10:22 AM
alexander said...: thanks; November 14, 2007 10:23 AM
Anonymous said...: bats are cool and blind; November 14, 2007 8:37 PM
Ryan said...: Will I love your story keep writing.; December 13, 2007 9:47 AM
rachel said...: You hade a grat story its the best.; December 13, 2007 9:51 AM
Erik said...: I like the part when brak tride to eat them.; December 13, 2007 10:07 AM
miranda said...: Will WOW I love your story.; December 13, 2007 10:19 AM
jamie said...: that wus a gud strey wey gud strey; December 13, 2007 10:19 AM

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