Monday, November 5, 2007

Erin's Story

Allison couldn’t jump rope. One day Allison got a jump rope but she couldn’t do it. But Rose could. She kept trying and trying but she just couldn’t do it. So she went to Rose’s house. But Rose wasn’t home. So she went back to her house. But she was locked out of the house. So she went back to Rose’s house and Rose was home. So she said, “Can you,” and she said, “Sure.” So they started and she was doing it and Rose said, “Go, go, go!”

8 comments:

MRs. f. said...

erin, that is a cool story.

joseph said...

it wans't a bad story

Alyssa said...

I like it.

kalen said...

I like your story Erin

Danielle said...

Erin that is a cool story!

kalen said...

I like your stop

Romello said...

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rachel said...

cool story keep writing.